The Dimensional Team

Hey guys what's going on so I had this crazy idea for a fan fiction that I personally think could be awesome, so here it is. As you can see the title is called the dimensional team, this fan fiction deals with a character called BioShock. Rip on the games? No, this character has absolutely nothing to do with the Bioshock series. Anyway the story follows Bioshock as he goes throughout the multiverse to stop a character called Darken, who wants to destroy and recreate the multiverse in his own image. BioShock realizes he cant do this task alone, so he recuits four Heroes to help them stop Darkon. These heroes are from popular comic book and video game franchises but the heroes I chose are Cole MacGrath from infamous Deadpool from Marvel Comics Lightning from Final Fantasy XIII Aqua from Kingdom Hearts I'd really like some feedback in to see if you guys think this would be in full fanfic or not.

(Note From BioShock) I have fought many battles I have seen things sense things I have never known before but most of all I have experienced so much pain. I have made enemies powerful enemies. But I've also made allies, ones that would stand beside me when the darkness threaten to consume everything. Am i near death? am i worthy to lead am I even worthy to protect? Whatever the answer may be I am here and I will fight until I can fight no longer. There are many planes many stories and many battles yet to be fought. But I wil never stopped until he is defeated. Then perhaps when that day has come I will finally have found peace.