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dragonfly2001
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zenryuji
~scratching my head as I ponder for the next big story~ Hmm? -_-
zenryuji
First thing, I might have to change that crumby title I gave it. Then again I could always use a 2nd oppinion. What do you think? Prince Namuh & The Prophecies Of Peace, should it stay or should it go?
dragonfly2001
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zenryuji
Aww ^///^ well thank you very much. This is actually the manga I'm working on the previous project reminded me of. It does have an interesting plot though. The main character starts out as a tasteless, egotistical royal heir who is forced to undergo several various tasks in order to save each kingdom he ventures to. It's kind of like Zelda, but there's alot of valuable lessons he has to learn. His journey first starts when he discovers The Sword Of Light, a magic weapon encrusted with gold, diamonds and the finest metal. On his way to heed the sword's calling, he meets the honorable tomboy, Princess Tangie and the powerhouse barbarian leader, Salvador. Til finally his quest comes to a conclusion when he finally goes up against Nomed, the anthro-snake prince. How is it so far. ^^
dragonfly2001
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zenryuji
Prince Namuh has blue spiky hair, kinda like Sonic but shorter. He thinks the whole world revolves around him and his so-called greatness, but he learns many lessons in humility and how to be a proper ruler and protector to his friends. Princess Tangie on the other hand is the exact opposite, she values honor, self-sacrfice and responsibility over her own life, making her a bitter rival more than a tagalong friend. She absolutely despises his egotisticism, until he learns the value of friendship and caring about others does she start to develop feelings for him closer to the end. Salvador was once a soldier in her army, til he became missing in action and made a sanctuary for the destitute under Prince Nomed's reign. He is courageous as he is strong and towers over most average warriors who gets in his way with his mighty spiked mace sling. Salvador may be bit of a brute on first impressions, but there's nothing he enjoys more than hoping to end Nomed's supreme rule. ^^ Shall I continue
zenryuji
Still extra debate on Tangie's hairstyle. I know it's going to be orange, but what style haven't I tried yet? Salvador's going to have a spiky pointed down blonde with a Hulk Hogan mustache LOL.
dragonfly2001
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zenryuji
That's the main idea anyway, still working on the storyline though. I want each mission to be different and special with lots of new creatures. There will also be an introduction on a new villain who threatens to seize the family throne named King Granite ^^ so expect to see an exciting new sequel hehe.
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