Shizoku

Hey guys! I would like some feedback on my script I wrote back a few years ago. It is 19 pages long but in script format so its rather short in terms of scriptwriting. Here's a link to it via dropbox - https://www.dropbox.com/s/mwla45i5zq4cqy2/Shizoku.pdf?dl=0 It is a story about a former assassin whose past comes back to haunt him and his newfound peaceful life.