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Black Freesia

machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Oct 28, 12 at 8:09pm
You had me that's true but now I'll fight back This world isn't evil it's just been dyed black! I'll take your evil plan before it's ecclesia and I'll turn it to good Your own evil, Black Freesia.
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Oct 28, 12 at 9:36pm
Bumpity bump.
momoichi
Oct 30, 12 at 3:40pm
very good o.o
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Oct 30, 12 at 10:10pm
Thanks so much ^^ Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Any advice? :3
momoichi
Oct 30, 12 at 10:15pm
none XD! u picked ryhming which in my mind is the only kind of readable poems, u ryhmed well, u had a continues story, a nice ending u sir, r a poet :P!
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Nov 01, 12 at 10:01pm
Wow Thanks *u*
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Nov 01, 12 at 10:01pm
Wow Thanks *u*
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Dec 21, 12 at 8:50pm
Bumpity bump
momoichi
Dec 22, 12 at 5:42am
xD did u ever think of makin a profession out of ur poems?
machina
- @machina commented on Black Freesia
Dec 22, 12 at 7:50pm
Never! Twas a one time thing.
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